Upon consideration, the third head (they should be marked A/B/C top to bottom, but someone forgot to label their options) is probably a little too Grey Fox (MGS) and the three small lights won’t read as well as the other shapes, especially in 009-01 where the figure is very small. Option B is neat in that it’s unusual to have a vertical shape in the middle of the face, so it’s alien and off-putting, but it also may not read clearly at a distance.

If 013-05 is included, please add match cut of him being shredded in blast (see initial boards) – otherwise, I believe unnecessary – let me know thoughts otherwise.

Sc 015-02_001 thru 004: please hew tightly to Casablanca framing of characters walking away, audience will note it and respond.

Specific note from Jen: back of Lincoln’s coat has odd back vent in relation to rest of coat. It seems like the type of jacket that Lincoln is wearing wouldn’t have a vent, so please remove the vent from the back of Lincoln’s jacket.

Could list all things that we dig about boards, but I have to get up tomorrow for work — all looks amazing, please continue and continue to swing for the cheap seats!

Violence: it would be nice to see bone, intestine, and large skin flaps within the liquidations. Otherwise, brilliant.

012-05_001 Notes: please have M-ESPer right hand down when holding F-ESPer. Heads at equal level – they’re lovers and the board appears to be more mother/child. Reference initial boards as well as feature Minority Report framing – questions as always, please contact me.

other note – 012-06_001: Awesome Framing of Characters!

Sc 008 Hallway in Building: interesting to make clean and high tech – otherwise add dripping water from above floors ala Blade Runner. Other suggestions would just cause more work so proceed either way with knowledge that it will look amazing.

I dig everything else – just looks amazing with too much to list but do want to note that 008-01_005 Cleaner has red eyes and that looks very cool.

Moving on…